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Nowadays, Korean music becomes popular in other countries, we can give several reasons for that. Firstly, they are creative in creating concepts. Each artist has her/his own characteristics. Secondly, the artists are good looking although they did plastic surgery to have a god look. Thirdly, they are very discipline in learning and practicing. Their performance are almost perfect. The last but not least, the Korea government supports them too to expand their entertainment industry to other countries. We can do the same things to increase popularity of Indonesian music industry.